tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4118029215922649447.post2783133188766358412..comments2023-04-24T08:46:52.355-06:00Comments on Krista Lynne Jensen: Tuesday Edit Crunch: A Sound On the BreezeKristahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03734014895825429358noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4118029215922649447.post-19397629959929663052010-03-17T18:41:03.790-06:002010-03-17T18:41:03.790-06:00Such good advice! It's amazing how much you...Such good advice! It's amazing how much you'll notice when reading aloud--even if it's just to yourself. Suddenly passages I thought were so great are clunky, or I find repeated words or a hundred other things.Annette Lyonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12493583432919249814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4118029215922649447.post-60746046587143222582010-03-16T12:24:54.609-06:002010-03-16T12:24:54.609-06:00I've heard this before, but it sunk in this ti...I've heard this before, but it sunk in this time. It must be the caps. ;)MTeacresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00381461599028233499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4118029215922649447.post-38002733735701856822010-03-16T12:03:37.771-06:002010-03-16T12:03:37.771-06:00Elana, I WISH I could be there tonight! I will be ...Elana, I WISH I could be there tonight! I will be here in Cody, reading my part as narrator in our RS Birthday Dinner program. SOMEDAY!!! (there we go with the CAPS again)<br /><br />Kate, it makes the trip faster, and opens up some great discussion about plot ideas and such!Kristahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03734014895825429358noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4118029215922649447.post-84484416053840166452010-03-16T10:46:13.697-06:002010-03-16T10:46:13.697-06:00I've read it out loud to myself and caught so ...I've read it out loud to myself and caught so many awkward constructions, especially in dialogue. I should try the laptop in the car trick since I'm also in the middle of nowhere.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13303922187736526290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4118029215922649447.post-25904892050352169542010-03-16T10:29:23.304-06:002010-03-16T10:29:23.304-06:00Reading out loud is a priceless way to see how thi...Reading out loud is a priceless way to see how things flow. How they sound. It's awesome.<br /><br />And will you be at B&N tonight??? Suzette Saxton and I will be there. Come find us! Or we'll find you!Elana Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912noreply@blogger.com